I’ve found writing a chorus or refrain to be one of the tougher points of finishing a lyric.
In order to find something that you can repeat over and over in a song, consider this question: why repeat yourself that often?
Here are a few possible answers:
- To ensure that you were heard.
- To emphasize.
- To remind.
- To recite a mantra.
- To ensure understanding.
- To show your conviction.
- To issue a warning.
- To ask a question.
- To celebrate something good.
- To convince others.
- To convince yourself.
- To reassure.
- To scold.
- To plead.
- To gloat.
- To give an order.
- To consider a new perspective.
- To spur somebody on to action.
- To advertise.
- To fish for a response.
- To revisit a question that’s resisting an easy answer.
- To emotionally process an event.
- To console.
- To show reliability.
- To relive something beautiful.
- To hammer us with the truth.
What’d I miss? Why else might you repeat something?
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Sarah
Because it means something different teach time it’s said.
One example, “Don’t Take the Girl,” by Tim McGraw
http://www.lyricsfreak.com/t/tim+mcgraw/dont+take+the+girl_20137360.html
Nicholas Tozier
You’re right about that, Sarah. That’s a classic lyric, too–thanks for posting it; I’d never actually read it on a page. It’s really well-crafted.
Pat Pattison calls this “Productive repetition”.