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Song demo: One More Summer Like That

http://www.nicholastozier.me/wp-content/uploads/2015/05/One-More-Summer-Like-That.m4a

Verse One

Read all day in the shade of the weeping willow;
skin your knees on the bark of the apple tree.
Run to the swing
where your bare feet wore the grass away

I want to have just one more summer like that!

Verse Two

Lakeside: sunbeams squirming on the
water’s edge, the dock’s legs peeling red.
Rush down the rutted road back to the
windowpane glow

I want to have just one more summer like that!

(Instrumental bridge)

Verse Three

Spin like a pinwheel until you fall down.
Stand up, but the world’s still whirling around.
Rush down the rutted road back to the
windowpane glow

I want to have just one more summer like that!

words and music by Nicholas Tozier

Guitar courtesy of Seán Barna

Creative Commons photo by José Manuel Ríos Valiente

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Comments

  1. Joshua

    May 31, 2018 at 18:14

    This gorgeous tune was clearly very inspired. Man, I’ve read all your blog posts and have only heard one song up until now, “Throw Your Rider”. Perhaps that title could be used as a homophone for the word “writer”, as it seems you’ve put a lot of work in propelling yourself forward. Your songwriting, singing and guitar playing have all evolved considerably. (You threw your writing ahead). Side note: thanks for all the great work you put into this site, as you’ve been a huge influence in designing my launching pad. I look forward to hearing more music!

    “Run to the swing where your bare feet wore the grass away.” Brilliant.

    • Nicholas Tozier

      June 3, 2018 at 08:21

      Hey thanks for listening Joshua. Glad you see signs of evolution here; I’m always working hard on technique. Really glad you’re finding the site useful, too. There’s a lot more to come. 😀

  2. Shanu Singh

    June 6, 2018 at 07:38

    Beautiful song with lovely lyrics and music.

    • Nicholas Tozier

      June 6, 2018 at 13:24

      Thank you Shanu!

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